Tuesday, 3 September 2013

A lover's voice

Your eyes sparkle like water in the lake..
Your hands float like a feather in the sky..
Your smile is worth dying for a thousand times..

If only I could be with you,
if only I could hold you..
My sleep will return..
My chase will stop..

A thousand Suns wouldn't match your fiery hair,
A thousand roses wouldn't match your magnificent lips,
A thousand deaths wouldn't match one life lived with you..

If only I could be with you..
If only I could hold you..


AJ: Shut the fuck up, you motherfucker! I am trying to read here!
Me:   :\




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15 comments:

  1. Unknown3 September 2013 at 22:59

    OMG..so my new friend is a poet too...Beautiful words.I wish i could write poetry with same zest.

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    1. I HEARD YOU3 September 2013 at 23:06

      well, this was actually supposed to be ironical but never mind, I will accept the comments heartedly ! :D :D

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  2. My Cactus Dress4 September 2013 at 05:31

    lol.. more than the poem, I am enjoying the humor here.. It seems like you exaggerated the whole thing and AJ showed you the door! lol funny.

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  3. Jyoti Mishra4 September 2013 at 19:13

    loved the poetry and much intended pun :P

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  4. KK5 September 2013 at 08:14

    You should force AJ to write a blog.

    And next time you write a poem, be far from AJ. Your college will take care of the 'far' part :-)

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  5. Ankit Garg5 September 2013 at 12:02

    Kya baat he Dude!! luv shuv te emotion... abhi college start hone se pehle aise likhega to college me to killer ban jayega tu. :D

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    1. I HEARD YOU5 September 2013 at 13:19

      sahi me?? :D College me bhai banna hi padega! warna samoohik balatkar ho jayega mera wahan pe :P

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  6. Jasmeet7 September 2013 at 11:42

    great ...seems u have just started blogging but ur skillful already to write many mature stuffs :) waiting more from u ...

    -Jasmeet

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    1. I HEARD YOU14 September 2013 at 10:35

      Hey! So u finally found my blog,gr8!
      yeah..i am a novice at blogging but your words of appreciation make me feel more than that. Thanks for boosting me up!

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  7. Arpit14 September 2013 at 00:08

    hahaha.. bhai Ashiqui 3 banane ke mood me hai kya! ;)

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  8. I HEARD YOU14 September 2013 at 10:37

    Iss post ki CBI jaanch honi chahiye! *Digvijay singh style* ;)

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  9. Unknown24 September 2013 at 11:52

    I like the poem. No comments about your friend :P

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